Hey everyone, the latest Until You Fall Asleep chapter has been read and reviewed. And I have gotten some great feedback on how this chapter feels a bit all over the place, so I will be making quite some changes to it.
Many thanks once again to those that have read it and shared their unfiltered opinion. This is the way the story will become better and more cohesive, so I appreciate it a lot. I am keeping the chapter online while I am editing it, so you can see it change in real time.
Lots of love, Martijn
Martijn Winkel 
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