In Overnight, the third chapter of Until You Fall Asleep, the two guys finally meet again after the festival, which kind of feels like a second first impression. How will they feel about each other now, all sobered up in the daylight?
This chapter needed quite a few changes. So I hope it reads a little easier now. And if not, I would love to hear your opinions again so I can make some more changes.
Overnight finishes the first part of this story which heavily focused on being intoxicated, the nightlife and new love. The next part called Dreamstate will shift into a different territory, where the dizzying spell of love starts to mess with your mind.
I hope you will all enjoy it.
Lots of love,
Martijn
Martijn Winkel 
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