Martijn Winkel

Hello everyone,

Both chapter five and the shorter chapter six of Until You Fall Asleep are now online. While both chapters still need some tuning, I wanted to share them anyway. This will give me a little push to finish them.

Chapter five has our boy contemplating work and life, unsure whether train rides actually make him feel relaxed or uneasy, as he makes his way to his love interest. Things seem to be slowly settling down as he comes to the conclusion that he might actually be in love, with a new wave of insecurities and doubts washing over him as he tries to enjoy the moment. The course of true love never did run smooth.

Chapter six finds our boy in a dreamlike state, where he loses a small part of himself in order to move forward. To be with the person he loves, he pushes himself toward an open relationship where both of them can discover more together. Finally giving in and putting his worries aside, he asks his lover not to take advantage of his trust.

I hope you enjoy both of these chapters. Feel free to give me any feedback, as I will be slowly editing them over the coming days.

Lots of love,
Martijn